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RikÖö
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18.12.06 19:36
Hey =)
Also ich find die Geschichte echt gut bis jetzt..
und ich schrieb Ella bald mal wieder das die korigierne soll, damit das dann auch grammatisch richtis ist!! xD
Aba nya wieter so ;]



Jonas Langer
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16.12.06 23:50
schreibt doch mal wieder... Viele viele beiträge sind in letzter zeit dazu gekommen und niemand schreibt was. was haltet ihr von der geschichte?



PoScH
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6.12.06 18:49
Ich find das bis jetzt echt gut !
Nur jetzt kommt der schwierigere Teil !!!



erheB
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27.11.06 22:09
There have been some men on the boot. And I think it haven't been best friends. When she heard this, she was shocked and responded: ”But he said that he went on the boot trip to be alone for a while, for to have time to think about some things.” But the Officer was sure and said:” No it’s a fact that there have been four persons on the boat.” When Jane thought about the last sentence the Officer said, she started to cry. The Officer asked:” Do you know if your husband have ever had contact with drugs?? I'm asking, because he died by consuming to much Heroin. I think the other persons on the boat sold him drugs and when they left the boot, he consumed it and died.” Jane shivered. Did Jack really took drugs? She could not believe it. She took the decision to find out what really happened. She said strongly: I will find out the truth and I will find the murderer of Jack.

In the afternoon she went determinedly to the police station of Miami and asked for the Inspector analysing the case of her man. She wanted to know all clues they found.

The Policeman told Jane all the facts she wanted to know about Jacks dead. At the end he said:” Please don’t spoil your live. You won’t find anything. It was an accident.”

But Jane didn’t listen to what the inspector said and thought: I know, Jack, you have been murdered and nobody will stop me from finding the murderer.



Ich habe das gefühl, dass ich was verfalschbessert habe, nur eigene fehler zu finden ist schwierig



erheB
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27.11.06 21:09
Für alle die hier lesen, dürft ruhig mal eure rechtschreibung überprüfen, wenn ihr nacher dran seit mit schreiben (wieder viel arbeit vor uns haben)



maka (Willi)
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26.11.06 19:57
lol
das wir es so lassen...sollte es heißen:D



maka (Willi)
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26.11.06 19:56
Also ich find den Anfang eigentlich sehr gut...ich weiß gar nicht was Steffan hat.ICh find man kann sehr gut weiterschreiben.Daher schlage ich vor,dass wir lassen es so.



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